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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 12 조회 12927

When do you eat a ramen?

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When people don't have any appetite or cooking is bothering, they usually eat a ramen.
튜터 교정 답변

When people don't have any appetite or cooking is bothering, they usually eat a ramen.

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When people don't have a lot of food or cooking is bothersome, they usually eat ramen.

*I wouldn't use the word appetite because that means a person is hungry. When you say the person doesn't have an appetite it means the person is not hungry so it doesn't make sense that they would want to eat ramen. 

*bothersome: this word means that a task is annoying or troubling to do (unfortunately "bothering" is not an English word)

*If you have any more questions please message me again or ask me during class

Have a great weekend

Teacher Beth

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