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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 12 조회 13175

Reading the newspaper 1

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Let me tell you about my favorite newspaper called The Korea Times. It is in English. I usually like to read the newpaper everymorning. There is a reason I prefer to reading it. First, I can read about Korea Issue in English. Actually, Lately I'v been to like reading in English. Also This newspaper is easyer then CNN because it handels Korea Issue. So I am familer with the articles. I can understand easy. Lastly, The newspaper has various fields such as National, Sports and Fun. As I read the newspaper everyday, I can get a lot of informations. So I've been more smart. And I could enjoy talking about diverse social issue with my friend for a long time. Therefor, I everyday like to read the newspaper. Reading the newspaper makes me wise.
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Let me tell you about my favorite newspaper called The Korea Times. It is in English. I usually like to read the newpaper every morning. There is a reason why I prefer reading it. First, I can read about Korean issues in English. Actually, lately I've been reading articles in English. Also, this newspaper is easier than CNN because it handles Korean issues. So I am familiar with the articles. I can understand them easily. Lastly, the newspaper has various fields such as national, sports and fun sections. As I read the newspaper everyday, I can get a lot of informations. So I become smarter. And I could enjoy talking about diverse social issues with my friend for a long time. Therefore, I like reading newspapers everyday. Reading a newspaper makes me wise.

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