answers for part6
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. Do you think it is essential for a company to put up an advertisement to success?
I agree with the statement that it is vital for a company to succeed. There are some reasons for it.
First of all, there are lots of companies in the market; a company should let the public know the company and its product not to fall behind in this competition.
In addition, companies can make a good image of them though an advertisement. People tend to buy a product from a company that seems to have a good image.
For those reasons, in order to success in the market, advertisements are very important for companies.
I agree with the statement that it is vital for a company to succeed. There are some reasons for it.
First of all, there are lots of companies in the market; a company should let the public know the company and its product not to fall behind in this competition.
In addition, companies can make a good image of them though an advertisement. People tend to buy a product from a company that seems to have a good image.
For those reasons, in order to success in the market, advertisements are very important for companies.
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