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answer for part6 #6

작성자: pos606652 담당 튜터: Richard1
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6. Do you think salary is the biggest factor that influences job satisfaction?
I don’t agree with the statement that salary is the biggest factor for job satisfaction. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, even with a high salary, there are many people who don’t feel satisfaction with their job since they don’t work what they like to do.
Secondly, whether you gain recognition at work or not is more important than salary, if you don’t get it from your boss or co-workers it’s hard to feel happy in your job.
Therefore, I believe salary isn’t the biggest factor that influences job satisfaction.
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6. Do you think salary is the biggest factor that influences job satisfaction?
I don’t agree with the statement that salary is the biggest factor for job satisfaction. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, even with a high salary, there are many people who don’t feel satisfaction with their job since they don’t work what they like to do (The verb "work" is usually intransitive, so it can't have an object like "what they like to do." Instead you might use "do what they like to do" or "do the work they like to do").
Secondly, whether you gain recognition at work or not is more important than salary; if you don’t get it from your boss or co-workers it’s hard to feel happy in your job.
Therefore, I believe salary isn’t the biggest factor that influences job satisfaction.

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