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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 17 조회 13028

[diary]2016.02.17 - 01

작성자: pos606652 담당 튜터: Richard1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We are already nearly 2 months into the new year. Time really flies. A few weeks ago,
I thought winter was gone, but the weather is starting to get to me. It's so cold.
Recently, I don't have many works to do. The amount of products in the factory I'm working
in has been reduced quite a lot (it's about 10% compared to the last year) since there
is financial strain. There are not many customers who want to buy steels and
there are already full of products which are waiting to be sold out there.
So it’s hard to find a customer. For those reasons I’m not busy. Since there is nothing to
make me busy and concentrate, time goes slowly. I wish we made products as many as possible
we could like the time in the past. I would feel pressured on my work though, it could help
me get job satisfaction with work.
튜터 교정 답변

We are already nearly 2 months into the new year. Time really flies. A few weeks ago, I thought winter was gone, but the weather is starting to get to me. It's so cold. Recently, I don't have much work (the noun "work" is usually uncountable) to do. The amount of products in the factory I'm working in has been reduced quite a lot (it's about 10% compared to the last year) since there is financial strain. There are not many customers who want to buy steel (the noun "steel" is also usually uncountable) and there is already full of products which are waiting to be sold out there. So it’s hard to find a customer. For those reasons I’m not busy. Since there is nothing to make me busy and concentrate, time goes slowly. I wish we made products as much as possible we could like the time in the past. I would feel pressured on my work though, it could help me get job satisfaction with work.

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