Reading the newspaper 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like reading Today's News on my own smartphone. I only read things that I'm interating in. Also I don't read whole about it. I read from my favorite news sections. There are a mount of my favorite news sections such as breaking news, entertainment and sports section. When I read breaking news, I get a lot of knowledge and information about my country and world issue. I often talk to my friends about them. I feel good and feel proud of myself. Next I read entertainment section. It covers current activity and affaire of celevrities . Even thought there are a lot of funs. After reading the this section, I go to a sports section. Usually most of men enjoy reading sports section. In my case, my favorite sports are scocer, baseball and tennies. Lately, Jocovich won the gold medal in Winbuldun open. When I read the article, I was so happy. Maybe I should try to read more instructive article to become more intelligent.
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