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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 17 조회 13608

Reading the newspaper 2

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I like reading Today's News on my own smartphone. I only read things that I'm interating in. Also I don't read whole about it. I read from my favorite news sections. There are a mount of my favorite news sections such as breaking news, entertainment and sports section. When I read breaking news, I get a lot of knowledge and information about my country and world issue. I often talk to my friends about them. I feel good and feel proud of myself. Next I read entertainment section. It covers current activity and affaire of celevrities . Even thought there are a lot of funs. After reading the this section, I go to a sports section. Usually most of men enjoy reading sports section. In my case, my favorite sports are scocer, baseball and tennies. Lately, Jocovich won the gold medal in Winbuldun open. When I read the article, I was so happy. Maybe I should try to read more instructive article to become more intelligent.
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I like reading today's news on my own smartphone. I only read things that I'm interested in. Also, I don't read the whole article about it. I usually read my favorite news sections. There are a mount of my favorite news sections such as breaking news, entertainment and sports section. When I read breaking news, I get a lot of knowledge and information about my country and world issues. I often talk to my friends about them. I feel good and feel proud of myself. Next, I read the entertainment section. It covers current activities and affairs of celebrities. There are a lot of fun. After reading this section, I go to sports section. Usually, most men enjoy reading the sports section. In my case, my favorite sports are soccer, baseball and tennis. Lately, Jocovich won the gold medal in Wimbledon Open. When I read the article, I was so happy. Maybe I should try to read more instructive articles for me to become more intelligent.

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