Hello teacher..
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hello teacher.
I'm your sutdent called "jelly". I'm sorry that I did not prepare to study this calss. As you know that I have traveled for somedays. I retuned to home by airplane at yesterday 10 AM.
I want to talk about my travel which I have visited Jeju island where is located in southern of Korea peninsula.
The Climate of Jeju island is very different from korea winter. If you arrive the airport you can feel warm wind in front of your face. Although this place where I live is very cold and chill wind. Because the island is located in the ocean of south and it is located in south.
When you drive around the road on beach, you can find a lot of flower and strange tree which i have't seen before anywhere. But the sight of landscape is very wonderfull and beautifull.
If you have a good luckey, you will meet some bird on the sky which sing loudly.
I have stayed for 5 days include last weekend.
Everything was good except someting. Unfortunately I taked a serious stomachache.
I geuss that I take some strange traditional food which cant get only get this place
I'm your sutdent called "jelly". I'm sorry that I did not prepare to study this calss. As you know that I have traveled for somedays. I retuned to home by airplane at yesterday 10 AM.
I want to talk about my travel which I have visited Jeju island where is located in southern of Korea peninsula.
The Climate of Jeju island is very different from korea winter. If you arrive the airport you can feel warm wind in front of your face. Although this place where I live is very cold and chill wind. Because the island is located in the ocean of south and it is located in south.
When you drive around the road on beach, you can find a lot of flower and strange tree which i have't seen before anywhere. But the sight of landscape is very wonderfull and beautifull.
If you have a good luckey, you will meet some bird on the sky which sing loudly.
I have stayed for 5 days include last weekend.
Everything was good except someting. Unfortunately I taked a serious stomachache.
I geuss that I take some strange traditional food which cant get only get this place
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