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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
< A exhibition that I recently visited >
A month ago, I went to Leeum Museum with My friend.
The museum was showing a special exhibition,'A homage to Korean Architecture : Wisdom of the Earth'.
It was composed of three part, Land of silence and majesty, Management of sites and construction of order, spaces of life and social activity.
All exhibition was about traditional architecture under the categories of Buddhist temples, royal palaces, city walls and the home of ordinary people.
The most interesting thing was variety display methods that the meseum used.
We could understand a traditional architecture with model of a building, videos, pictures.
Besides there were digital magnifiers and 3D images. These display method was enough to have a interest in architecture to many people.
Although The reason I visited the museum was my friend's interest, It was also good time to me and i could expand my mind.
A month ago, I went to Leeum Museum with My friend.
The museum was showing a special exhibition,'A homage to Korean Architecture : Wisdom of the Earth'.
It was composed of three part, Land of silence and majesty, Management of sites and construction of order, spaces of life and social activity.
All exhibition was about traditional architecture under the categories of Buddhist temples, royal palaces, city walls and the home of ordinary people.
The most interesting thing was variety display methods that the meseum used.
We could understand a traditional architecture with model of a building, videos, pictures.
Besides there were digital magnifiers and 3D images. These display method was enough to have a interest in architecture to many people.
Although The reason I visited the museum was my friend's interest, It was also good time to me and i could expand my mind.
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