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작성자: 1101082390 담당 튜터: Sarenna2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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< A exhibition that I recently visited >
A month ago, I went to Leeum Museum with My friend.
The museum was showing a special exhibition,'A homage to Korean Architecture : Wisdom of the Earth'.
It was composed of three part, Land of silence and majesty, Management of sites and construction of order, spaces of life and social activity.
All exhibition was about traditional architecture under the categories of Buddhist temples, royal palaces, city walls and the home of ordinary people.
The most interesting thing was variety display methods that the meseum used.
We could understand a traditional architecture with model of a building, videos, pictures.
Besides there were digital magnifiers and 3D images. These display method was enough to have a interest in architecture to many people.
Although The reason I visited the museum was my friend's interest, It was also good time to me and i could expand my mind.
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A exhibition that I recently visited
        A month ago, I went to the Leeum Museum with my friend. The museum was showing a special exhibition, A Homage to Korean Architecture: Wisdom of the Earth. It was composed of three parts: "Land of Silence and Majesty," "Management of Sites and Construction of Order," and "Spaces of Life and Social Activity." The exhibition was about traditional architecture under the categories of Buddhist temples, royal palaces, city walls, and the homes of ordinary people.

        The most interesting thing there was the variety of display methods that the meseum used. We could understand traditional architecture through the models of buildings, videos, and pictures. Besides that, there were digital magnifiers and 3D images. These display methods are enough to spark an interest for architecture within many people. Although the reason I visited the museum was due to my friend's interest, I also had good time and was able to expand my mind.

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