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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 19 조회 13521

Reading the newspaper 3

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
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I'd like tell you about exprience of reading a newspaper. Actually, six months ago, I went to English Language Course to study English. My teacher was mark who was Canadian. He gave me a homework that is summerising about articals in English. At that time, I couldn't speak English well. That was so difficult for me. I spant a lot of time to summarize a article in English. That was super terriable. However, after pass the time, I read English article again and again. So I get used to reading and summarizing as English. I had became better my homework. I falt so easy and I falt a fun. I couldn't be affraid my homework. Even, I enjoyed reading a articals in English. I think the best way to study English is reading English articles. I still read the English live news on my smartphone every morning but one thing that's different is that I enjoy reading it now.
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I'd like to tell you about my exprience of reading newspapers. Actually, six months ago, I went to an English Language Course to study English. My teacher was Mark and he is Canadian. He gave me a homework to summarize articles in English. At that time, I couldn't speak English well. That was so difficult for me. I spent a lot of time to summarize the article in English. That was super terrible. However, after some time, I read English articles again and again. So I get used to reading and summarizing them in English. I became better with my homeworks. I felt so relaxed and I felt fun. I wasn't afraid to do my homeworks and I started enjoying reading the articles in English. I think the best way to study English is to read English articles. I still read English live news on my smartphone every morning but one thing that's different is that I enjoy reading it now.

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