The Day after Tomorrow
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
If we go through the climate disaster such as glacial weather, it is difficult to overcome individually.
First, we should get together and cooperate. If we are lucky, we'll maybe meet a good leader as in the movie.
Second, we should find the reason of the disaster, and try to make the solutions.
Finally, I want to be with my families at the important time.
First, we should get together and cooperate. If we are lucky, we'll maybe meet a good leader as in the movie.
Second, we should find the reason of the disaster, and try to make the solutions.
Finally, I want to be with my families at the important time.
튜터 교정 답변
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