answer for part6 #15
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
There are some shortages when you work in a startup. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, the salary you get paid will be a small amount of money compared to the money in a big company. It’s hard to feel job satisfaction with a low salary.
Secondly, there could be some risks that make a startup failed and working in a startup is not an easy job, so many employees in startups suffer from job instability.
Lastly, you will be more likely to get more opportunities if you work in a big company rather than working in a small company.
For those reasons, I think there are many shortages when you work in a startup.
First of all, the salary you get paid will be a small amount of money compared to the money in a big company. It’s hard to feel job satisfaction with a low salary.
Secondly, there could be some risks that make a startup failed and working in a startup is not an easy job, so many employees in startups suffer from job instability.
Lastly, you will be more likely to get more opportunities if you work in a big company rather than working in a small company.
For those reasons, I think there are many shortages when you work in a startup.
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