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answer for part6 #16

작성자: pos606652 담당 튜터: Richard1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
There are lots of advantages when you work with your boss. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, the boss has been working for a lengthy time, he has lots of vocational skills you should learn.
Secondly, the boss knows what tasks you are working on, so he can give you many instructions that are relevant.
Lastly, you will get along with your boss while working together. It’s always good to have good relationship with your boss.
For those reasons, there are lots of advantages while working with your boss
튜터 교정 답변

There are lots of advantages when you work with your boss. Here are some reasons to support the idea.
First of all, the boss has been working for a lengthy time; he has lots of vocational skills you should learn.
Secondly, the boss knows what tasks you are working on, so he can give you many instructions that are relevant.
Lastly, you will get along with your boss while working together. It’s always good to have a good relationship with your boss.
For those reasons, there are lots of advantages while working with your boss

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