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The fun of using online flea market in Korea 3/4

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: Vanessa1
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Therefore usually first come, first get negotiating opportunites and many sellers are willing to reduce prices if they can sell their goods as soon as possible.

Another tip is that you can get large discounts if you meet sellers and make a direct deal with them. As you guess, you can ask sellers to deduct transportation costs that you have to pay for. In my experience, sellers give buyers larger discounts than fares for the goods probably because of buyers’ efforts to visit sellers. Okay, I also think some of you have a lot of useless junk in your house.

So I’ll tell you how to sell what you have well in garage sale communities. First of all, write down details about what you’re selling with photos when you post on community websites.The more you explain about your items, the more people will contact you for buying them. It is no doubt that elaborate descriptions and photos help to build up credibility of your goods.
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Therefore usually first come, first get negotiating opportunites and many sellers are willing to reduce prices if they can sell their goods as soon as possible.

Another tip is that you can get large discounts if you meet sellers and make a direct deal with them. As you guess, you can ask sellers to deduct transportation costs that you have to pay for. In my experience, sellers give buyers larger discounts than fares for the goods probably because of buyers’ efforts to visit sellers. Okay, I also think some of you have a lot of useless junk in your house.

So I’ll tell you how to sell what you have well in garage sale communities. First of all, write down details about what you’re selling with photos when you post on community websites.The more you explain about your items, the more people will contact you for buying them. It is no doubt that elaborate descriptions and photos help to build up credibility of your goods.

 

 

Hello John!

What an impressive writing you just gave me!

First of all, I have to commend you for a job well done on the writing.
It's very well-patterned and straightforward. 

Thanks for the tip. It is something surely I can ponder about. 

 

Best regards,

Vanessa

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