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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 02. 23 조회 13681

The fun of using online flea market in Korea 4/4

작성자: pos601974 담당 튜터: Vanessa1
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Secondly, offer buyers various options as many as possible for their convenience. For example, I send my used items to anywhere by parcel or meet buyers face to face to deliver them near the POSCO Center, subway Sunreung or Samsung station depending on what buyers want. Furthermore, I let buyers to pay for not only cash but also gift card and any coupon which is even exchange of cash. They sure are good conditions for buyers to get used goods easily, aren’t they?
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Secondly, offer buyers various options as many as possible for their convenience. For example, I send my used items to anywhere by parcel or meet buyers face to face to deliver them near the POSCO Center, subway Sunreung or Samsung station depending on what buyers want. Furthermore, I let buyers to pay for not only cash but also gift card and any coupon which is even exchange of cash. They sure are good conditions for buyers to get used goods easily, aren’t they?

 

 

Hello John!

What an impressive writing you just gave me!

First of all, I have to commend you for a job well done on the writing.
It's very well-patterned and straightforward. 

Thanks for the tip. It is something surely I can ponder about. 

 

Best regards,

Vanessa

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