diary-2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The reason why I am writing down about him is that he is leaving soon. He is moving on to bigger and better things next month. Absolutely, he does deserve it. However I’m a bit of gloom. The man who is going to take his position is not bad to work with, but my boss is so nice. No one can be replaced him. I will never work for such a capable boss in the company again. I’m not sure someday weather I could be a leader, but if I could become, I would want to be like him. To congratulate for his leaving to a batter place, Tomorrow dinner his leaving party will be held. I’ll say that “Thank you” and “Looking forward to working with you again.
튜터 교정 답변
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