2Days : Introduction My cowokers.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I would like to talk about people I work with in the cost estimation part.
One of my close co-workers is Mr-lee. He is aroud 180cm tall, of thin buld and wears glasses.
He has a black, straight, short hair. He is a always fashinable and looks smart!
He is both intelligent and a thoughtful person. He takes initiative and sets a good examplte to employees, as he has a strong work ethic and a strong sense of resposibility.
He is in charge of maintaining and adjusting the cost estimation system as well as lecturing in the global manager education course.
Without a dout, He is a typical samsung man. As a cowoker, I respect him and feel lucky to work alongside him.
Although, I printed out our text book, I hope to take class regarding the topic I want to talk!
Please review my scrip and correct my answe!
Next Day I want to talk about my company product!
Thanks!
One of my close co-workers is Mr-lee. He is aroud 180cm tall, of thin buld and wears glasses.
He has a black, straight, short hair. He is a always fashinable and looks smart!
He is both intelligent and a thoughtful person. He takes initiative and sets a good examplte to employees, as he has a strong work ethic and a strong sense of resposibility.
He is in charge of maintaining and adjusting the cost estimation system as well as lecturing in the global manager education course.
Without a dout, He is a typical samsung man. As a cowoker, I respect him and feel lucky to work alongside him.
Although, I printed out our text book, I hope to take class regarding the topic I want to talk!
Please review my scrip and correct my answe!
Next Day I want to talk about my company product!
Thanks!
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