Promotion
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Recently, our company announced promotions. The promotion means to go higher position such as from general manager to manager something like that. This announcement makes the one who get a promotion happy and makes others discourage. We congratulated them and consoled as well respectively. And by tradition, we held the company dinner to celebrate winner and console losers. I give my junior colleage who didn't get promotion even three thims including this year to console and drink together.
The promotion is related to many things like salary, rights and power so on. Therefore it seems many people want to be a promotion.
In my case, It will come to a chance for promotion to me.
I want to get a promotion next year.
To be like that, It seems I must study English very hard.^^
The promotion is related to many things like salary, rights and power so on. Therefore it seems many people want to be a promotion.
In my case, It will come to a chance for promotion to me.
I want to get a promotion next year.
To be like that, It seems I must study English very hard.^^
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