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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 07 조회 13654

Today is parents day in Korea.

작성자: 72509 담당 튜터: Elizabeth2
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Today is parents day in Korea.


Yesterday, I received 카네이션 and presents from my daughters for the parents day. It was first time to get presents which were including letter and some coupons which I can use it to mydaughters when I need some helps. It was supprising and great for us.
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Thank you for the submisson Ben! I'm sorry it's taken me a bit to respond. I'm sorry, I didn't see that you had posted something.

Nice effort!

-Teacher Elizabeth

 

Corrections:

Today is Parents Day in Korea. Yesterday, I received 카네이션 and presents from my daughters for Parents Day. It was my first time getting a present from them, which included a letter and some coupons which I can use to give to my daughters when I need some help. (I'm not sure what you meant here Ben, I corrected the sentence as best I could)  :)  It was a suprise! We all had a great time!

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