OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ Shopping)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I guess it was last Saturday when I went to grocery-shopping recently.
The recent time I went grocery-shopping was last Sunday.
I went to E-mart shopping mall with my husband.
It is located near my house. It takes only 10 minutes on foot.
So I often go there for grocery-shopping.
Last Sunday, I experienced an unexpected event when I was shopping.
At that time, I was grocery-shopping with my husband.
I found the last beef which was on big sale by order of arrival.
I moved fast and I got it! I was so happy!
Then, I ran to the vegetable section to buy some tomatoes and carrots for the salad.
Luckily the tomatoes were on big sale too!
I think the day was very lucky day for me!
On the way home I couldn’t stop smiling.
The recent time I went grocery-shopping was last Sunday.
I went to E-mart shopping mall with my husband.
It is located near my house. It takes only 10 minutes on foot.
So I often go there for grocery-shopping.
Last Sunday, I experienced an unexpected event when I was shopping.
At that time, I was grocery-shopping with my husband.
I found the last beef which was on big sale by order of arrival.
I moved fast and I got it! I was so happy!
Then, I ran to the vegetable section to buy some tomatoes and carrots for the salad.
Luckily the tomatoes were on big sale too!
I think the day was very lucky day for me!
On the way home I couldn’t stop smiling.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!