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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 07 조회 13212

Eating out 1

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Hello, is this ABC restaurant. My name is David. I am calling about my resevation. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you three or four qustions. My office are suppouse to eat out your restaurant for dinner. We are around 20 people. First of all, We need privite room because we are a lot of people and don't bother others. Is it's possible? Second, what are you recommand your best meal for us. We are really like chines cusine. Third, is there enough parking area? My office is pretty far from your restaurant. So most of my collegues take their cars. Finally, How much can I get a discount? We were often go to your restaurant as well as have membership card. Thank for your kind answer. Bye.
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Hello, is this the ABC restaurant? My name is David. I am calling for my reservation. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you three or four questions. My office is supposed to go to your restaurant for dinner. We are around 20 people. First of all, we need a private room because we are many and we don't want to bother others. Is it possible? Second, what best meals you can recommend us?  We really like Chinese cuisine. Third, is there enough parking area? My office is pretty far from your restaurant. Finally, how much discount can I get? We often go to your restaurant and we also have membership cards. Thank for your kind answer. Bye.

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