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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 08 조회 13664

5 free days in a row

작성자: 1102047927 담당 튜터: Gail
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I've got 5 free days in a low.
It' was a long break!
I felt less guilty about taking naps.
I traveled to YouSu with my family members.
We went to eat out famous foods in YouSu every days.
I was happy to be there with my family only.
My two kids said that it was wonderful tour.
But, it is harder to go back to work.
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I've got 5 free days in a low.

> I've got 5 free days in a row.

 It was a long break! I felt less guilty about taking naps. = good sentence

I traveled to YouSu with my family members. = good sentence

We went to eat out famous foods in YouSu every days.

> We went out to eat foods which Yosu is known for.

I was happy to be there with my family only.

> I was happy to be with my family.

My two kids said that it was wonderful tour.

> My two kids said that it was a  wonderful tour.

But, it is harder to go back to work.= good sentence

 

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