OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ Memorable hoilday)

Question : Can you tell me about a particularly memorable holiday you had when you were young? Describe what you did and what made it so memorable. Give me as many details as you can.

I didn’t remember exactly, I was probably 20 years ago.  (it was probably 20 years ago)

At that time, my family went to my grandfather’ house.  (grandfather's)

It was my father home time, when it comes to Chuseok, my family always went to there.  (My father had time off from work for Chuseok, and my family always went there)

It was enjoyable and fun for me since my relative met and we could play all the day.  (relatives)    (play all day)

Until suddenly, my Mon said she had a headache.  (Mom)

At first my family thought that she was making an excuse because my Mon didn’t like go there.  (didn't like to go

But soon, we realized she wasn’t lie, so we went to hospital right way.  (lying)    (to the hospital)

Doctor said that she was not serious.

After she got hoot, took a rest and she got better.  (hot)

Although we didn't arrive on time, we felt relieved that she was fine.