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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 11 조회 13795

Eating out 3

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Hi mom. I'm David. I made a reservation for dad's birthday last weekend. However, the restuarant is not open this weekend. It's terriable. I didn't check my reservation in advance. I am so sorry. I think we'd better to find another resturant for our family party so early. Pops up in my brain. I know really good vietnam resturant as well as near my place. Right now, I am calling to there. I will check that I can make a reservation for family party this weekend. Also there are so many people in our family around 20 people. We need 5 tables and need a private room. Mom don't worry about it. I have to solve this problem. After I make a new reservation, I am calling to you again. Bye mom.
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Hi mom. I'm David. I made a reservation for dad's birthday last weekend. However, the restuarant is not open this weekend. It's terrible. I didn't check my reservation in advance. I am so sorry. I think we'd better find another restaurant for our family party earlier. Pops up in my brain. I know a really good Vietnam restaurant near my place. Right now, I am calling there. I will check if I can make a reservation for our family party this weekend. Also there are so many people in our family, around 20 people. We need 5 tables and a private room. Mom don't worry about it. I will solve this problem. After I make a new reservation, I will call you again. Bye mom.

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