OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ TV Show)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Question : How has your interest in TV shows changed throughout the years?
How are the shows you watched in the past and the shows you currently
Watch different from each other?
Well, let me talk you about comedy TV shows between old and now.
When I was young I watched the TV shows that studio shooting and the scope of stories was very simple and some childish.
Moreover, the actors of comedy TV shows appeared on only comedian. However, as I’ve gotten older, the style of comedy TV show has changed.
Nowadays, the most popular comedy shows are reality comedy show of the outdoor shooting.
Also, I could watch the variety actors such as movie star, singer and so on.
Personality, I think the comedy show is more enjoyable than one.
So it is best way to relieve my stress.
How are the shows you watched in the past and the shows you currently
Watch different from each other?
Well, let me talk you about comedy TV shows between old and now.
When I was young I watched the TV shows that studio shooting and the scope of stories was very simple and some childish.
Moreover, the actors of comedy TV shows appeared on only comedian. However, as I’ve gotten older, the style of comedy TV show has changed.
Nowadays, the most popular comedy shows are reality comedy show of the outdoor shooting.
Also, I could watch the variety actors such as movie star, singer and so on.
Personality, I think the comedy show is more enjoyable than one.
So it is best way to relieve my stress.
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