OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ impressive TV show)
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Question : What was the most impressive TV program? Describe it in detail. Who was in it?
What’s the story? How did it end?
My most impressive tv program is that was broadcasting ‘The love’ a few years ago.
It is a kind of human documentary that MBC channel 11 showed
The programs consisted of omnibus stories.
Love was the main theme.
There are many love stories such as husband and wife, parents and children.
The reason I was impressive this program is that their love story was sad
All members’ conditions were the worst because of an incurable disease.
However, they overcame through love power.
While I was watching the program, I was very moved their real love.
Although the ending of the grogram was quite sad, I will never forget touching this grogram
What’s the story? How did it end?
My most impressive tv program is that was broadcasting ‘The love’ a few years ago.
It is a kind of human documentary that MBC channel 11 showed
The programs consisted of omnibus stories.
Love was the main theme.
There are many love stories such as husband and wife, parents and children.
The reason I was impressive this program is that their love story was sad
All members’ conditions were the worst because of an incurable disease.
However, they overcame through love power.
While I was watching the program, I was very moved their real love.
Although the ending of the grogram was quite sad, I will never forget touching this grogram
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