OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ household chores)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Question : On a typical day how do you handle your responsibilities? Do you have your own methods or processes to deal with house chores? Have you ever failed to perform your duty?
In fact, Since I am office worker, during weekday, I don’t enough time doing household chores. But it comes weekends, I always do it.
I am responsible for doing the laundry and cook.
Among them my main duty is cook in the kitchen.
My favorite dish is Korean noodles. To make Korean noodles, I first need to do some shopping.
I usually go to ABC supermarket near my house.
Once I’m done with shopping, I go back home and start cooking!
I have a special method to make Korean noodles tastier, which is adding an egg and some chopped vegetables.
To be honest, I am not good at cook, so sometimes I used to fail to cook.
But I always try to take care of my responsibility of cooking on the weekends.
In fact, Since I am office worker, during weekday, I don’t enough time doing household chores. But it comes weekends, I always do it.
I am responsible for doing the laundry and cook.
Among them my main duty is cook in the kitchen.
My favorite dish is Korean noodles. To make Korean noodles, I first need to do some shopping.
I usually go to ABC supermarket near my house.
Once I’m done with shopping, I go back home and start cooking!
I have a special method to make Korean noodles tastier, which is adding an egg and some chopped vegetables.
To be honest, I am not good at cook, so sometimes I used to fail to cook.
But I always try to take care of my responsibility of cooking on the weekends.
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