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OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ furniture)

작성자: 1102013556 담당 튜터: Rebecca2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Question : When was the last time that you purchased new furniture for your home?
What kinds of item did you purchase? Where did you purchase them? Did you go shopping alone or with other people? Were you satisfied with them?


Well I can’t remember exactly when I last became purchased new furniture … um…I guess, it was probably 1 years ago.
At that time I decided to remodel my house. Especially, the sofa and table in the living room are very old-fashioned.
Before I went there, I reviewed through SNS, portal site, Blog and so on.
I learned the newest trend and price information and then I straight went IKEA
I went there with my husband because I don’t drive a car and assemble furniture
I bought a luxury handmade sofa.
In fact when I found it, it was very expensive. But Luckily I got a huge discount coupon.
And I paid only $1000
I think the day was very lucky day for me! On the way home I couldn’t stop smiling.
튜터 교정 답변

Question : When was the last time that you purchased new furniture for your home?
What kinds of item did you purchase? Where did you purchase them? Did you go shopping alone or with other people? Were you satisfied with them?


Well I can’t remember exactly when I last became purchased new furniture … um…I guess, it was probably 1 years ago.  (I last purchased)  (1 year)

At that time I decided to remodel my house. Especially, the sofa and table in the living room are very old-fashioned.   (were)

Before I went there, I reviewed through SNS, portal site, Blog and so on.

I learned the newest trend and price information and then I straight went IKEA  (went straight to)

I went there with my husband because I don’t drive a car and assemble furniture

I bought a luxury handmade sofa.

In fact when I found it, it was very expensive. But Luckily I got a huge discount coupon. And I paid only $1000

I think the day was very lucky day for me! On the way home I couldn’t stop smiling.

 

 

very good job with your furniture assignment!  :)

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