OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ Appliance)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Queston1 : What types of appliances are used with someone's home? Are microwaves, dishwashers, or garbage disposals used within the home? Aside from these items, what other types of appliances are used in the house?
I use many appliances things such as refrigerator, television, audio, microwave, airfryer and so on.
But I have not dishwashers, garbage disposals since there are so high of the power consumption rate. In addition, I have a big kimchee refrigerator; it is my best essential appliances.
I always eat a various kind of kimchee, so it's very important that they are taste and freshness.
A kimchee refrigerator support the optimum conditions of kimchee.
In fact, the kimchee refrigerator price is very expensive, but I think it’s worth paying for.
I use many appliances things such as refrigerator, television, audio, microwave, airfryer and so on.
But I have not dishwashers, garbage disposals since there are so high of the power consumption rate. In addition, I have a big kimchee refrigerator; it is my best essential appliances.
I always eat a various kind of kimchee, so it's very important that they are taste and freshness.
A kimchee refrigerator support the optimum conditions of kimchee.
In fact, the kimchee refrigerator price is very expensive, but I think it’s worth paying for.
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