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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 14 조회 12617

OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_Appliance)

작성자: 1102013556 담당 튜터: Rebecca2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Queston 2 : Tell me about the most essential appliance you use within the home. What is the specific purpose for this appliance? What other alternatives would you have if you did not use this appliance?

My the most essential appliance is the electric fryer. I am big fan of fried foods; I often used the electric fryer called airfryer.
Do you know airfryer? it is hit appliance of Phillies electronic company.
It’s working by electric power and we can be used it instead of frying pan.
If you don’t have it, you can use frying pan and oil.
When we cook fired food, the eclectic fryer is very essential items.
Using it, it is possible to reduce the calorie. so I don’t imagine my life without it.
튜터 교정 답변

Queston 2 : Tell me about the most essential appliance you use within the home. What is the specific purpose for this appliance? What other alternatives would you have if you did not use this appliance?

My the most essential appliance is the electric fryer.

I am big fan of fried foods; I often used the electric fryer called airfryer.

Do you know airfryer?

it is hit appliance of Phillies electronic company.  (is the hit appliance)

It’s working by electric power and we can be used it instead of frying pan.  (it works)   (can use it)

If you don’t have it, you can use frying pan and oil.

When we cook fired food, the eclectic fryer is very essential items.  (fried)   (electric)   (is a very essential item)

Using it, it is possible to reduce the calorie. so I don’t imagine my life without it.  (can't)

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