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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 05. 08 조회 12842

The movie genre I hate.

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Well, as a matter of fact, the thing you need to know is that I’m a kind of movie buff, so to say I’m really into watching movies. However, I’d say that I’m not that fond of horror movies. To be more specific, I cannot stand that terrific feeling of suspension and unexpected surprising which I believe makes me too nervous. I guess the reason has something to do with the fact that I had a kind of traumatic experience when I was young. I mean, when I watched the Japanese movie titled Ring all by myself, and that was even wee hours, I was so scared that I even suffered from a series of nightmares. After that experience, I decided not to watch that genre of movies forever. I wish none of my friends would ask me to go to theater to see that horrible flicks in the future.
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Well, as a matter of fact, the thing you need to know is that I’m a kind of a movie buff, so to say I’m really into watching movies. However, I’d say that I’m not that fond of horror movies. To be more specific, I cannot stand that terrific feeling of suspension suspense and unexpected surprising surprises which I believe makes me too nervous. I guess the reason has something to do with the fact that I had a kind of traumatic experience when I was young. I mean, when I watched the Japanese movie titled entitled Ring all by myself, and that was even at wee hours, I was so scared that I even suffered from a series of nightmares. After that experience, I decided not to watch that genre of movies forever. I wish none of my friends would ask me to go to the theater to see that horrible flicks in the future.

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Hi Sean! It just checked your composition, and you were able to say there what you want. I agree that horror movies give people traumatic experience after watching it.

I noted some errors, so please check them when you have the time. Have a great day!

- teacher Ida^^

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