목록으로 돌아가기
공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 15 조회 11955

Appointment 1

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I usually first check my e-shedule on my own smart phone. Actually I've been writting my schedule on my phone lately. It's really convience and easy. When I check my schedule this weekend, befor I make an appointment with my friend. If my shedule is clear in this weekend, I make a phone call to make a apppointment with my best friend. I ask to him that his schedule is availble this weekend. If he is clear this weekend, I ask to watch a movie together. However, if he hasn't any time this weekend, I ask to meet next weekend. Otherwise I ask to him which day do you want to meet me. I have to have very patient to make an appointment with my friend. Actually, I am spposed to meet my best friend to see a musical tomorrow afternoon. Let me see if he remember our appointment.
튜터 교정 답변

I usually first check my e-shedule on my own smart phone. Actually I've been writing my schedule on my phone lately. It's really convenient and easy. I checked my schedule for this weekend before I make an appointment with my friend. If my schedule is clear in this weekend, I will call my friend to make an apppointment with him. I will ask him if his schedule is available this weekend. If he is clear this weekend, I will ask him to watch a movie together. However, if he is not free this weekend, I will ask him to just meet next weekend. Otherwise, I will ask him on what day he wants to meet me. I have to have patience to make an appointment with my friend. Actually, I am spposed to meet my best friend to see a musical tomorrow afternoon. Let me see if he remembers our appointment.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!