Appointment 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As you might know, I am working as system enginner. I have a lot of colleges also those are my clients. So I make many appointment while I work in my office every weekdays. Acually last Thursday I made an appointment with my colleges. We met to discuss for our new system. Thay told to me their asking. It was terrible for me. The works were pretty a lot. So I persuaded to reduce the works. I said that if I were you, I'd first do important works. I'd later do less important job. We were talking about it for a long time. At last I got the persuasion from them. I was really proud myself. Also they had satisfied. After all, right now I expect the project work out. We made an appointment to see again next thursday. Therefore we leaved conference room with happy each other.
튜터 교정 답변
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