OPIC Script Grammer check (Topic_ Neighbors)

Question : When was the last time you had an encounter with one of your neighbors.
Who was the neighbor? How did you meet him or her? Tell me about this encounter with a lot of details.

I live in an apartment near 잠실station with my family.

I think my neighbors are very friendly and nice.

I live on the 15th floor, and my close neighbor lives my next door.

They are married and have one young child.

The husband works for LG, which is one of the major companies in Korea, and the wife works at the bank.

In fact, we hardly ever encountered because we are office worker.  (hardly ever encounter each other)

Several days ago, we met in elevator; we talked about the new shopping mall and elementary school.  (met in the elevator)

We agreed that it makes our life more convenient and enjoyable, but causes a lot of traffic jam.  (jams)

I think I'm lucky to have good neighbors like them.

Great job on this assignment!