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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 27 조회 12939

Hi teacher

작성자: 1101878799 담당 튜터: Ara1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm sorry I can't take a class on monday. because I have special education at that time.
See you on wednesday. bye bye~
튜터 교정 답변

I'm sorry I can't take a class on monday. because I have special education at that time.
See you on wednesday. bye bye~

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I'm sorry I can't take the class on Monday because I have a special training to attend to at that time. ~ ( the - article usage/ Monday -capitalization/ a - article usage/ training -better word/ to attend to -additional word for better sentence/ Do not seperate them with the conjunction 'because'. You can make it into 1 sentence.)

See you on Wednesday. Bye bye! ~ ( Wednesday- capitalization/ Bye - capitalization/ ! - exclamation point)

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NOTE:

Red - Better word/expression

Blue - Additional word

Green - Punctuaton/ Capitalization

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Hi there, Flash! Thank you for sending me a message. I appreciate you for informing me about your absence. By the way, in composition correction, all the messages you send will be corrected. You can send me a message in the message box next time :)

Thank you again!

Teacher Ara :3

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