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3/29 countryside
Hello Hunter!
I just wrote daily speaking English
It maybe make a mistake
Please help me
I said that Gyeongsangbukdo consists of 23 municipals and cities
There are mostly farming villages and contrysides.
When I was childhood and schooldays, I lived Taegu city and hardly visited countryside so I didn’t know what countryside’s life is.
My first workplace was Sangju city and I moved in countryside.
At first I couldn’t be accustumed to living in sangju city.
People in there are unkind because at that time outsiders(people out of city) seldom came and went there and people living there are known one another.
Outsider like mw is not their interesting concern.
‘As time goes by, the atmosphere of society are gradually changed.
They realized that if outsiders or tourists don’t visit there, that place is not developed and is not known to anybody
Hello Hunter!
I just wrote daily speaking English
It maybe make a mistake
Please help me
I said that Gyeongsangbukdo consists of 23 municipals and cities
There are mostly farming villages and contrysides.
When I was childhood and schooldays, I lived Taegu city and hardly visited countryside so I didn’t know what countryside’s life is.
My first workplace was Sangju city and I moved in countryside.
At first I couldn’t be accustumed to living in sangju city.
People in there are unkind because at that time outsiders(people out of city) seldom came and went there and people living there are known one another.
Outsider like mw is not their interesting concern.
‘As time goes by, the atmosphere of society are gradually changed.
They realized that if outsiders or tourists don’t visit there, that place is not developed and is not known to anybody
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