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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 30 조회 12382

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작성자: 1100632765 담당 튜터: Hunter1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Before long I was married, my house was stolen.
I lost my wedding gift like watch, ring, necklace.
I left the card at the house but I didn’t know that my card was also stolen at that time.
3-4 days later I realized that my card was lost and I reported at the card company promptly and I dropped by there to confirm lost card’s safety.
But the thief already paied at several places like message and jewelry shop and so on.
I was worried about paying back used money with my lost card.
Fortunately if you lost your card and you report the card company as soon as possible, you don’t need pay that money. so I was happy
From that time I am very careful with cards
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Excellent job, Rose! PLease review the edited text below :)

After getting married, my house was robbed.
I lost wedding gifts like my watch, ring, and necklace.
I left the card at the house, but I didn’t know that my card was also stolen at that time.
3-4 days later, I realized that my card was lost and reported it to card company promptly. I dropped by there to confirm lost card’s safety,
but the thief already paid at several places like massage parlors and jewelry shops.
I was worried about paying back the stolen money.
Fortunately, if you lost your card and report the card as soon as possible, you don’t need to pay that money. I was happy to hear that.
Since that incident, I have been very careful with cards.

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