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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 03. 30 조회 13275

My workplace

작성자: kjyoo108 담당 튜터: Cee
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The office building I work in is 16 stories tall and my office is on the 13th floor.
The thing that sets this building apart from the others is that one wall is made entirely of glass, so we can look at the mountains and a small lake in the distance through the window.
And my seat is located by window, I gets a lot of sunlight.
I appreciate the amount of sunlight I get there, as it creates a cheerful atmosphere.
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The office building I work in is 16 stories tall and my office is on the 13th floor.
The thing that sets this building apart from the others is that one wall is made entirely of glass, so we can look at the mountains and a small lake in the distance through the window.
And my seat is located by the window, I get  a lot of sunlight.
I appreciate the amount of sunlight I get there, as it creates a cheerful atmosphere.

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