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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
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Before I catch a flick, I always talk with my kid what we see the movie.
My son’s opinion is important to see the movies what kind of movies to decide.
So I always talk with him.
To select the movie, we check out trailers and reviews for newly-released films.
Sometimes I book a ticket online, other times we go to a movie and I buy tickets at on site ticket box.
If we have time before movie begins, we always buy big size popcorn and beverage at the concession stand.
My kid likes to see the movie by eating treats but I don’t eat anything to concerate the movie.
After the movie ends, we often do a shopping.
On my way home, we have a conversation about the plot and give our thoughts.
Before I catch a flick, I always talk with my kid what we see the movie.
My son’s opinion is important to see the movies what kind of movies to decide.
So I always talk with him.
To select the movie, we check out trailers and reviews for newly-released films.
Sometimes I book a ticket online, other times we go to a movie and I buy tickets at on site ticket box.
If we have time before movie begins, we always buy big size popcorn and beverage at the concession stand.
My kid likes to see the movie by eating treats but I don’t eat anything to concerate the movie.
After the movie ends, we often do a shopping.
On my way home, we have a conversation about the plot and give our thoughts.
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