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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
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The one of the biggest holidays in Korea is Chuseok which means Korean Thanksgiving Day.
This holiday lasts for 3-4 days.
The day before, people visit their hometown to see parents and relatives and prepare food.
the day after, people go back their home to work.
If the biggest holiday is weekends(Saturday and Sunday), we can have one more holiday.
At Chuseok, people get up earlier than usual day.
They are busy and men clean up a house and women prepare ritual food.
Children are pleased with joining their cousins not seeing for a long time.
People hold a memorial service for their ancesters and they eat a special food for breakfast.
Korean surely eat songpyeong, a bean-filled rice treat, on Chuseok.
In the past, women in the house made songpyeong on hand.
Processing to make it is not easy and takes a little time.
Nowadays, people buy easily products made at factory.
After breakfast, they visit to their ancestral graves.
At night, pepple make wishes on a full moon.
The one of the biggest holidays in Korea is Chuseok which means Korean Thanksgiving Day.
This holiday lasts for 3-4 days.
The day before, people visit their hometown to see parents and relatives and prepare food.
the day after, people go back their home to work.
If the biggest holiday is weekends(Saturday and Sunday), we can have one more holiday.
At Chuseok, people get up earlier than usual day.
They are busy and men clean up a house and women prepare ritual food.
Children are pleased with joining their cousins not seeing for a long time.
People hold a memorial service for their ancesters and they eat a special food for breakfast.
Korean surely eat songpyeong, a bean-filled rice treat, on Chuseok.
In the past, women in the house made songpyeong on hand.
Processing to make it is not easy and takes a little time.
Nowadays, people buy easily products made at factory.
After breakfast, they visit to their ancestral graves.
At night, pepple make wishes on a full moon.
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