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The one of the biggest holidays in Korea is Chuseok which means Korean Thanksgiving Day.
This holiday lasts for 3-4 days.
The day before, people visit their hometown to see parents and relatives and prepare food.
the day after, people go back their home to work.
If the biggest holiday is weekends(Saturday and Sunday), we can have one more holiday.
At Chuseok, people get up earlier than usual day.
They are busy and men clean up a house and women prepare ritual food.
Children are pleased with joining their cousins not seeing for a long time.
People hold a memorial service for their ancesters and they eat a special food for breakfast.
Korean surely eat songpyeong, a bean-filled rice treat, on Chuseok.
In the past, women in the house made songpyeong on hand.
Processing to make it is not easy and takes a little time.
Nowadays, people buy easily products made at factory.
After breakfast, they visit to their ancestral graves.
At night, pepple make wishes on a full moon.
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The one of the biggest holidays in Korea is Chuseok, which means Korean Thanksgiving Day.
This holiday lasts for 3-4 days.
The day before, people visit their hometown to see parents, relatives, and to prepare food.
The day after, people go back their home to work.
If the biggest holiday falls on the weekend, we can have one more holiday.
During Chuseok, people get up earlier than usual.
They are very busy. Men usually clean up a house while women prepare ritual food.
Children are pleased with joining their cousins that they haven't seen for a long time.
People hold  memorial services for their ancestors, and they eat a special food for breakfast.
Koreans traditionally eat songpyeong, a bean-filled rice treat, on Chuseok.
In the past, women in the house made songpyeong by hand.
The process for making it is not easy and takes time.
Nowadays, people can easily buy products made in a factory.
After breakfast, they visit ancestral graves.
At night, people make wishes on a full moon.

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