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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 05 조회 13060

Furniture 1

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
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All kind of funiture is used in my house. My favorite funiture style is antiqu wooden funiture. I really like wood funiture. Especially I like sweet smelling with wood and soft feeling with wood as well as color with wood. So I usually buy wooden funiture. We have four wooden bookshelfs and my all closets are made the wood. Actually I bought a couch which was made the wood. To be honist, I don't have a special funiture store. If I have to say, I like buying on the internet. Before I buy a funiture, I think what I need some funiture. And then I need to google it or I serach on the G-Market. It's my favorite on line market. I always I read using review about the funiture. And then I deside to buy a funiture. Why I usually buy a funiture on the net? They have so cheap. Also I can get a discount because I have a membership. Then I don't have special funiture store. However, I'm so saticfied on the internet market.
튜터 교정 답변

All kind of furniture is used in my house. My favorite furniture style is an antique wooden furniture. I really like wood furniture because I like the sweet smell of wood and soft feeling with wood as well as the color of the wood. So I usually buy wooden furniture. We have four wooden bookshelves and all of my closets are made of wood. Actually, I bought a couch which was made by wood. To be honest, I don't have a special furniture store. I like buying furniture on the internet. Before I buy a furniture, I think what furniture I need. And then I need to google it or search on the G-Market. It's my favorite online market. I always read the reviews about the furniture. And then, I decide to buy the furniture. Why I usually buy furniture on the net? They are so cheap. Also, I can get a discount because I have a membership card. I don't have a special furniture store. However, I'm so satisfied on online market.

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