CPR Class
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I attended the class, CPR this afternoon.
Have you ever heard about it?
It was the most impressive class I ever have had in my life.
A professional showed us how to do CPR.
Vidio clips were shown us for one and half hours
,and then the teacher gave me an oppertunity to perform the real practice with test device.
Finally I get a skill.
Now I can make people almost dead alive.
It was really a wonderful experience.
Have you ever heard about it?
It was the most impressive class I ever have had in my life.
A professional showed us how to do CPR.
Vidio clips were shown us for one and half hours
,and then the teacher gave me an oppertunity to perform the real practice with test device.
Finally I get a skill.
Now I can make people almost dead alive.
It was really a wonderful experience.
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