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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 06 조회 13403

Furniture 2

작성자: 87316 담당 튜터: Sheryl
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I'd like to tell you about all of process when I buy a new furniture. The first thing to buy a new funiture is search on the internet. My favorite online market is G-market which is so populer in my country. They are sailing a lot of thing. Electronic garget, clothes, gloceries and Furniture. When I search to buy a new furniture, I prefer to not only populer wooden furniture but also cheap prices. Also reading reviewe about the furniture is necessry. When I decide to buy what kind of furniture, I visit furniture store. My favorite furnitue stores are Ingedoing furniture street near by my place. It takes 10 minitures by car from my house. Even thought I decide to buy a new furniture from online market, I have to check real furniture at the store. So I usually go to furniture store with my wife. She has good sence of design. And She can be able to cut price of furniture. Finally, After I confirm to buy the furniture, I pay the furniture with presure. Waiting for the furniture to be delivered is one of the most exciting thing.
튜터 교정 답변

I'd like to tell you about the whole process when I buy a new furniture. The first thing to do when buying a new furniture is to search on the internet. My favorite online market is G-market which is so popular in my country. They are selling a lot of things like electronic gadget, clothes, groceries and furniture. When I search to buy a new furniture, I prefer not only popular wooden furniture but also cheap prices. Also, reading reviews about the furniture is necessary. When I decide to buy the kind of furniture, I visit the furniture store. My favorite furniture stores are Ingedoing Furniture Street nearby my place. It takes 10 minutes by car from my house. Even though, I decide to buy a new furniture from online market, I have to check the real furniture at the store. So I usually go to a furniture store with my wife. She has a good sense of design. And she is able to cut down the price of the furniture. Finally, after I confirm to buy the furniture, I pay the furniture with pleasure. Waiting for the furniture to be delivered is one of the most exciting thing.

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