Furniture 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'd like to tell you about all of process when I buy a new furniture. The first thing to buy a new funiture is search on the internet. My favorite online market is G-market which is so populer in my country. They are sailing a lot of thing. Electronic garget, clothes, gloceries and Furniture. When I search to buy a new furniture, I prefer to not only populer wooden furniture but also cheap prices. Also reading reviewe about the furniture is necessry. When I decide to buy what kind of furniture, I visit furniture store. My favorite furnitue stores are Ingedoing furniture street near by my place. It takes 10 minitures by car from my house. Even thought I decide to buy a new furniture from online market, I have to check real furniture at the store. So I usually go to furniture store with my wife. She has good sence of design. And She can be able to cut price of furniture. Finally, After I confirm to buy the furniture, I pay the furniture with presure. Waiting for the furniture to be delivered is one of the most exciting thing.
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