Furniture 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Half a year ago I bought a new couch at furniture store. I had worn out a couch. I needed to replace a existing couch. So I went to there with my wife. The furniture store was recommended from my college. The store bose is my college's aunt. She was an honest person. I wanted to buy the new furniture from a trust person. So I bought the furniture from offline store. I saw it and tryed touching it. Since I desided to buy the couch. A couple of weeks later, my sister in law's family visited my home. They had been staying for a week. They had two younger daughters. A girl was six years old and another was eight years old. They enjoyed jumping on my couch. I was shocked because I saw they were jumping on my expensive couch. However I never said you don't jump on the couch. So I talked to her if you didn't jump on the couch, when I came home at evening, I bought some ice cream for you. She had keep our promise also I had keep to buy some ice cream. Therefore I could protect my expensive couch. I felt pride of myself.
튜터 교정 답변
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