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공개 첨삭 완료 2016. 04. 08 조회 13428

ubiquitous

작성자: 118843 담당 튜터: Amanda2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
With the progress of technologies, especially information technologies, everything - human being, devices, sensors, computers, etc. - will be connected through the internet.
That is, we can communicate at any time, at everywhere, with everything.
I think, it’s ubiquitous computing.
튜터 교정 답변

Great job with the word of the day Tommy! You used it perfectly! I corrected one or two minor things, but for the most part, your sentence structure was almost perfect! Keep up the hard work! See you next class! 

-Amanda

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Corrected sentences listed below:

With the progress of technology, especially information technologies, everything (human beings, devices, sensors, computers, etc.)  will be connected through the internet.
That is, we can communicate at any time, everywhere, with everything.
I think it’s ubiquitous computing.

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