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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
A memorable event that was associated with weather usually happen in winter.
In winter, a lot of snow fell down and roads are slick.
Two years ago in winter happened accident.
The night before rained a little and in the morning roads were frozen slightly but I wasn’t aware of them.
When I went to work, I cross the street a crosswalk with my backpack and I suddenly slipped and fell on my backside.
I jumped to my feet and walked again on my way.
I was ashamed that in rush hour many drivers saw my sliding.
Since that accident, I go to work wearing sneakers.
It’s comfortable and safe.
In winter, a lot of snow fell down and roads are slick.
Two years ago in winter happened accident.
The night before rained a little and in the morning roads were frozen slightly but I wasn’t aware of them.
When I went to work, I cross the street a crosswalk with my backpack and I suddenly slipped and fell on my backside.
I jumped to my feet and walked again on my way.
I was ashamed that in rush hour many drivers saw my sliding.
Since that accident, I go to work wearing sneakers.
It’s comfortable and safe.
튜터 교정 답변
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