Pet
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I own a puppy named Mong. He is a 5-year-old china Shih Tzu.
When I first saw him at a pet store, I immediately fell in love with him.
Mong has white fur with yellow spots on his body which makes him even cuter.
Whenever I gently pat him belly, he feels better.
I feed him twice a day, and wash him once a month.
Raising a pet requires a great deal of care and a big responsibility.
However, I don’t feel tired when I give Mong a bath or when I brush his teeth,
because he’s a part of myfamily.
When I first saw him at a pet store, I immediately fell in love with him.
Mong has white fur with yellow spots on his body which makes him even cuter.
Whenever I gently pat him belly, he feels better.
I feed him twice a day, and wash him once a month.
Raising a pet requires a great deal of care and a big responsibility.
However, I don’t feel tired when I give Mong a bath or when I brush his teeth,
because he’s a part of myfamily.
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